Comments : All That He Is

  • 13 years ago

    by No one

    I love this piece, it's beautiful but also very deep and sad. I can really relate to it since it's what I feel for a certain person aswell.

    Absolutely wonderful, please keep writing! You're one of my favourite writers!


  • 13 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Wow. breathtaking. i can tell that he is your everything.
    i too have someone like this.
    the flow of this was stunning.
    the rhyming, PERFECT
    "He's what keeps me alive
    And what drives me insane
    He's the cure to my sickness
    And the cause of my pain"

    Amazing. you should make it a quote!

    Read your post.
    could you please do my new poem
    "Dear Sarah"
    id really appreciate it.
    thank you
    take care

  • 13 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg this is wonderful. i loved it. the contradictions were well written into the poem. i can kinda relate to this. excellent job, 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    For not being able to write anything for awhile you did a fantastic job. I loved your rhyming and the flow. I totally understood everything you were saying. I had to read a few more times it was that good. =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Infernus

    Very good, great flow and word usage. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by gwynnedolynskie

    Omg i love this poem! you are very talented!


  • 13 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Woop wopp..anyother great great great poem from you :]

  • 13 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Very well written! I love the whole meaning to the poem I can really relate. Keep up the great work 5/5

  • WOW...This is amazing. And I can totally relate considering i feel the same way about my ex..

  • 13 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice, it flows so well, nightmare, interesting twist...=)

  • 12 years ago

    by MissMana

    Wow amazing..i luv your poems..they are always soo good...your poems just always flow..and this one i like cuz i can relate..well i could prolly relate to a lot of yours but this i decided to write just what happens to me in a relationship...i cant have a perfect relationship with anyone...maybe its me or maybe it them...either i love keep writing..:P..S.M.I.L.E