Wow. breathtaking. i can tell that he is your everything.
i too have someone like this.
the flow of this was stunning.
the rhyming, PERFECT
"He's what keeps me alive
And what drives me insane
He's the cure to my sickness
And the cause of my pain"
Amazing. you should make it a quote!
Read your post.
could you please do my new poem
id really appreciate it.
For not being able to write anything for awhile you did a fantastic job. I loved your rhyming and the flow. I totally understood everything you were saying. I had to read a few more times it was that good. =]
Wow amazing..i luv your poems..they are always soo good...your poems just always flow..and this one i like cuz i can relate..well i could prolly relate to a lot of yours but this i decided to write on...lol...its just what happens to me in a relationship...i cant have a perfect relationship with anyone...maybe its me or maybe it them...either i love keep writing..:P..S.M.I.L.E