Yeah i like this one

Nice poem....best hopes and wishes....tc..and tnx for the comment...

I totally know exactly what you were feeling in this poem. I've been in this situation before. You wrote the poem with so much emotion and it's really well written. Great job! 6/5

.:CiNdY:.

It doesnt matter
that you broke my heart in two
it just means that now
each half belongs to you.
Wow I lovvvvvvve these lines... *thumbs up*

I like your poem

I really liked this. The simplicity of the words added to the piece.
It was really sweet, and like other's... I really loved these lines..

It doesnt matter
that you broke my heart in two
it just means that now
each half belongs to you.

Very creative, and sweet.

Excellent.
--Elly.

Very good poem. Well-written, the flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

(this could be in the "lost love" section)