I loved the closing line.It totally made the poem what it is which is fantastic.It holds so much sorrow in it's words.The flow and rhyming were pretty good too so you get a 5/5 from me

<3Amber

I loved the closing line.It totally made the poem what it is which is fantastic.It holds so much sorrow in it's words.The flow and rhyming were pretty good too so you get a 5/5 from me

<3Amber

As the person said before me this is a poem that many can relate too. I must say that compared to the other poem i read of yours this one was better. The flow continued throughout the whole poem with bearly any breaks. A magnificent piece my friend. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander

I can totally relate to this poem i been through the same things so i can understand how you feel...5/5

Another perfect well written poem..it was great, although depressing. Flow was exceptional and the conclusion just tied all the stanzas together nicely. well done again. keep writing! 5/5

Now this one, I really wish there wasn't so much rhyme because it was a little to over powering for my taste. But that's just my opinion. I liked the message though. Your poems for me have messages that stick. I could relate to this poem a lot unfortunatlly and I know mostly everyone probably could as well. Nice read. 4/5
kaila

The title really drew me and the contain is really emotional...
This poem is really catchy and I enjoy this very much...
Especially the last stanza, I love it very much
You really know how to write
5/5 for sure!!!

This poem was alright. it did seemed a lil off flow but other than that the poem was intresting. i did enjoy it

The last line was amazing and perfectly ended the poem. I really like the descriptive words you used. This is a poem I could read more than once and still enjoy just as much. 5/5

Dat wuz beautiful...very cute and sweet...hope she'll notice and return the love u have for her..

I LOVE THIS!!
I HAVE FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE... THIS POEM IS GREATLY WRITTEN!!