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by Cyndel Kuhn Jan 23, 2008
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All you were was a lie a big fat lie i was honest i never lied to you i told you everything i was honest and you all you did was lie i gave you the chance to be honest but you still lied i said i loved you you said you loved me to but it was just a lie you were a lie we were a lie everything was a lie how could you do this to me |
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16 years ago
For a title how about the ultimate lie, Lies sadly are a part of life but I despise them to, I can relate to this poem with my ex makes me mad thinking of it. Your poem had feelings and I dont mean to insult you but just give an idea try to make stanzas and rhymes that may make your poem flow better just my opinion remember 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.
