Until the End

by Just Sierra   Jan 23, 2008


"Beware, beware, hold fast, hold true!"
I whispered this, but this you knew
Day by day and through and through,
Love is blind as I'm blind for you.

"Sunrise, sunrise, be strong like day!"
Thus to my angel, I start to pray
My faith be sturdy, never to sway
As long as you are here to stay

"Ashes, ashes, oh when they fall!"
I'll sing my heart, however small
May beauty and passion fill the hall
Of pain that cripples until I crawl

"Love me, love me like the wind!"
Life is short, yet my life I'll send
Yours, forever, no need to pretend
I'm yours, all yours until the end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    "Beware, beware, hold fast, hold true!"
    I whispered this, but this you knew
    Day by day and through and through,
    Love is blind as I'm blind for you.

    that is literally like....my favourite verse of poetry in the world, lol.im serious!
    i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!!!

    but not as much as I LOVE YOU!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I love this piece from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is filled with emotions and truly excellently written. You did great job with rhymes and created very unique rhythm through the poem.
    Feelings are expressed superbly. I like the atmosphere that you created, too.
    I can choose my favorite stanza, every part of this piece is equally fantastic.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hwakfkjaefhi3wotui94itv05yt50963053055

    this is going to be like...in a poetry book in the future when your dead and kids are going to be STUDYING its awesomeisity

    xx

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