Comments : Over and Over Again

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Oii this reminds me of the guy im with atm,
    mhmm i always get the blame and evetything like what u wrote but i cant stop loving him.. :P
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    Aww girl, try not to keep going back to someone who isnt worth it! You can do better!! We shouldnt be his 2nd best!

    Sad poem....i can relate to some parts....

    Keep it up -n- take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow i can relate to this poem 100% which is sad but true! it was very well written! 5/5

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I liked this poem; I liked the way you ended each stanza with "over and over again" but it reminded me of the song by tim mcgraw and nelly(?) and i didnt like that song lol nah nah its a good poem!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I hate when that happens... I sooo hate being controled... good job

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    This poem speaks the truth.. there r some ppl in relationships that always takes the blame.. again.. my bestfrnd can relate to this... for some reason.. you guys hav the same troubles that you've been through.. great poem! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I like this poem! Its not my favorite but I like how you repeated "Over and Over again" the flow seemed alittle rocky to me

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is touching. I could feel the sad emotions all the way through. The repetance of the last line made the main idea even stronger. The flow and rhyming were great. A piece many can relate to, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    So sad
    the repitition of this "over and over again" in the end of each stanza shows how tired you are of this eternal "over and over again's" and wholly it adds the needed sad and tired and disappointed intonation, and leaves a feeling of some kind of unfinishness of this story and here it's great (i mean it's a great poetic thing, not a great feeling of course :) )

    the rhythm is very clear and kinda simple but that makes it even more emotional. i always think that such simple rhythm makes a poem very sincere, like perhaps words of a child, it made me feel these feelings, especially through details and i realized that's much more than details because they repeat "over and over again" and gather, and it's painful.

    this poem wasn't exceptional but it was so heart-felt! i don't know what touched me the most in it; probably the emotions here and how you express them in a kinda continent way, i mean not screaming "I suffer! My heart is broken! I feel soooo bad" but putting your feelings in laconic phrases that tell much more than these screams.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    Luv it.. its very sad, it describe what every gril does basiclly.. wish it was longer though.