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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This one was one of your best the way you kept a flow and kept rythuming really good
    job on this one 5/5 again

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this is really ood and i loved your ryming in it. i know how you feel i have had a guy do that to me i think almost every girl goes through somthing like that

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    This is rather interesting.. it had a flow and it rhymes.. and i like the story behind it.. nice poem =]