by Beautiful Chaos Jan 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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I close my eyes each night, |
by RobinAnn13
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My favorite stanza was the last one. I felt like the first stanza didn't fit in with the rest of the poem. It was longer and, although it still flowed well, the rest of the stanza's were very short and direct. I still give it a 5/5 though |
by Pink Romance
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NICE WORK, I NEED A DREAM LIKE THIS ONE. LOL! |