The late promise ring

by henry   Jan 27, 2008


Im coming to you with this promise ring,
to be true and always be yours like kings n' queen.
i spill my heart to yu,
saying i love you n' ill always be faithful n' true.

so i pull out the box,
all of the sudden you say stop.
i feel a sudden shock inside,
and i see tears start to fall out your eyes.

you tell me you have a confession to make,
i just hope its not to much to take.
you tell me you found someone new,
i cry deep inside n now feel lonely and blue.
cuase now its time to let yu loose.

but i said before you go,
i just want you know.

i loved you!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg this made me cry...wow...if you honestly did purpose to someone and this did happen..im sorry!=[

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Aw. that poem made me cover my mouth. that was a shocking poem. i hope this didnt happen to u cause that something now man would ever want to face.then the girl confessing? o no.

  • 16 years ago

    by KATIE

    AWW THIS WAS REALLY CUTE AND SAD :( BUT GOOD POEM:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    I really like this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    That would possibly one of the worst situations ever. I really liked the poem though, it almost made me cry. ];