by Lost IN a RIVER of Tears Jan 27, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Why do fools, fall in love. |
by RayRay
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This was beautiful |
by Tom Swart
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How fragile the vessel is a young lovers heart and how willing they are to plunge head first into the sea of love. I think that as time goes by your poets pen will mature and the joys and pains of love will spring forth to make its words come alive. One suggestion, pay attention to grammar, there are a lot of corrections to make here. Other than that I liked your heart felt emotions. |
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I like this one |