Comments : Am i ready

  • 16 years ago

    by T uh Belle lll

    Always expect the unexpected, don't you agree?

    Like may others your poetry tells a story about your life, which brings meaning to this piece.

    I wish you all the best luck sweetie!

    `tia

  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    Stay strong, if you can get through one im pretty sure you can get through with another one! :)

    Any job is better then no job, remember that! I wish you the best of luck!

    Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem I love stories poems , and this one is wonderful

  • Stary strong,dear.Everything will be okay.I'm sure you'll be an even greater person and mother with another baby on the way.Like I said on the discussion board.I'd kill to be able to have a baby.But remember everything happens for a reason and if you ever want to talk I'm here to listen and try to help.

    The poem was great though.So much emotion.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was a cute............poem, but it could have been a little better i thought, but it was still sweet, but id have to say i think it deserves a 4/5, but the message and what your trying to say, like whats happeneing in ur life, maybe? it was good

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Ohh i like this one.. talks about pregnancy in an early age.. it's really good that you wrote the truth of what's going to happen when girls get pregnant and how a big change will it be in their lives.. i like this =]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Good flow,best of luck:],stay strong

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Another well written poem with a powerful message short and to the piont

  • 10 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    This poem is good..very realistic 5/5