This is actually a funny poem:
"All I know is if your dad found our toys, he may perish my little girls and boys." XD
I liked the flow and structure. But I don't think this is a much of a poem, although it has rhyming and a structure similar to one. Nice job, was really funny, 4/5

LOL It is pretty funny. I don't know if I just have a sick mind, or if your actually talking about sex toys... anyways it was pretty good for what it was, which is just a cute short poem for your gf. Short and sweet, decent poem. 3/5

Haha, I was wondering th same thing, were you talking about sex toys? Anyways, it was cute and made me laugh. So good job. :]]

Cayce xx