Memories

by Cathie   Jan 29, 2008


In the darkest hour
just before the dawn is breaking
my soul grows so cold
that my whole body is shaking

It's all so silent
and all so dark and sad
I look but sees nothing
but everything I once had

I long for the sun
but time is standing still
it makes me stop and wonder
of everything i feel

I'm drawn into the darkness
I fall into a deathly sleep
I might not ever wake up
because I fell so deep

I wake to the sound of a whistle
and the sweetest of all word
I can't believe that "Goodmorning"
is the best thing I've ever heard!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is really great! I like the concept and the rhyming. The flow is a little shaky and a few words could be changed, but overall, it's great. I think you have a natural talent for poetry. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work. Take a little time to reread this piece out loud and picture the changes you need to make. Come back and edit and I'm sure the votes will rise. Keep up the good work.

    Letty