LOVE shines like sun, feels like rain and smells like a flower

by Lizaveta   Jan 29, 2008


The day I met you first was as sunny
As my heart when you looked in my eyes
The day you took my hand, the sun was shining
Like your eyes which looked just like stars

The night we kissed was dark and moonless,
My thoughts seemed hidden in a mist
I was so happy... close to foolness
It felt like flying on a cloud, this kiss

The last night we danced was rainy,
Raindrops were falling on our cheeks
Such tender words, you told me
That this time was the best three weeks.

The morning we said goodbye was so grey
Tears were running down my face
You were kissing me, again and again
I knew I had to leave this beautiful place.

The memories I keep smell like flowers
The letters I receive are like your touch
I know we'll hardly ever see again each other
But I just feel I still love you so much.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I really loved this poem. the changes in weather set the mood perfect, showed the feelings that should be portrayed with in the stanzas. great work on that part. your flow was almost perfect. but one thing i would change.

    I was so happy� close to foolness�
    i would change to
    i was so happy... close to foolishness.

    and you copied it from word. so i would go to edit to get rid of the �marks. just delete them and put in the punctuation that is supposed to be there.

    great work dear.