Staring Into the Fire

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jan 30, 2008


Staring into the wondrous fire
feeling my heartbeat getting quicker
all the poems they would inspire
as i watch their rhythmic flicker

cozy and snug
yet fiercely wild
dangerously serious
yet playfully mild

my stomach gets butterflies
it starts feeling light
battling to look away
I won't loose this fight

but the fires they've got me
they jump and they dance
to the deep drum of my heartbeat
I'm caught in their trance

they jump and they crack
they hop and they snap
my gaze they are taking
my attention they trap

I'm staring in the fire
all the emotions that arise
I'm staring in the fire
and the fire is in your eyes

Thank you for reading my poem. please comment i love comments. btw in this poem wen i say "they" im tlking about the fire.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Loved the imagery in this piece. wow ur good! i wish i could write like this lol.

    "I'm staring in the fire
    all the emotions that arise
    I'm staring in the fire
    and the fire is in your eyes"

    perfectly worded. truthfully!

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Im moved. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachele

    Thts really good

    i like ur use of language

    keep up da good work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by mindy

    That was awesome. the guy i like has me caught in a trance and i understand everything!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. amazing. seriously. i felt like i was looking into the fire as i read it, couldn't tear my eyes away. i know how it feels to look at someone that way and watn to tear your eyes away, but not being able to...thanks so much

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