Redeemed Love

by Juan   Jan 31, 2008


Today I felt so calm,
as my strength grew from my palm,
the reason why is that I was talking to you,
once again it felt like my dreams could come true.

But when the conversation ended,
the strong feeling hit me,
as if everything faded,
still i found the answer of my happiness,
the answer is you,
just please understand what I've went through.

Even though your far away from me for all these night,
yet it still feels like your here holding me tight,
although we are apart,
for me it still feels like we are together as a heart.

As for this day, i will redeem that love that was lost,
and again i will make our paths come to cross,
Now you understand how much this love of mine,
is like a crime,
except its a commitment i give to you,
all you have to do is to accept it through.

You're the angel from up above,
and I'm merely a human that wants to redeem our love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Wooow i really loved this one so far i think its the best and its so sweet you must really love this girl alot. keep it up 5/5 kasia

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I love this poem it was good you had good rythem keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Really good poem is the best you have writen .really sad but you kept the flow and it rhymed .keep up the great work