Like the picture (I did the MS word thing lol) Specially like the short lines, really effective xXx

I like this one alot. it's also different, but it's a good different.

Copied and pasted to the word and saw what you ment, this is a nice trick. The poem itself is nice, also I didn't really like the cute ending. The rhyming and flow were good, structure was unique. keep it up 5/5

Oh I just loved the words you used here and the style you choose to write in was unique and interesting. I loved how the lines got shorter as the poem progressed because it built suspense. Well done *5/5*

Oooooo I love concrete poems, the way they're long and flowy and then short and punchy. Although I've never been able to write a half decent one. I really like the natural flow that all of your poems seem to have, you're obviously a very naturally talented poet! 5/5 once again,

Em xXx

This made me wish opon the star at the top of a migic wand