Very vivid, I saw all your descriptions in my mind. It belongs in Dark & Fantasy! Just wonderful! 5/5
Nicole

Very nice poem.
Great imagery!
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

It was dark. Very dark. Disturbing imagery. perfectly grotesque. Good job. Five out of five.

Beautifully written for the gruesome story behind it. 5/5

Deeply dark indeed with flawless flow inthis free verse
5/5

Woww... Very strong... Superbly written!

Keep up the good work, is all I can say! 8)
5/5.