Comments : Recalling The Deed

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Very vivid, I saw all your descriptions in my mind. It belongs in Dark & Fantasy! Just wonderful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very nice poem.
    Great imagery!
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It was dark. Very dark. Disturbing imagery. perfectly grotesque. Good job. Five out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Beautifully written for the gruesome story behind it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Deeply dark indeed with flawless flow inthis free verse

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    Woww... Very strong... Superbly written!

    Keep up the good work, is all I can say! 8)