X Love x

by Freckles   Feb 1, 2008


I wanna show you just how much I love you,
but everytime I get the chance I chicken out.
Look into my eyes && baby I assure you
You'll see exactly what I'm talking about.
I've got all this love inside of me,
It feels like I'm about to explode.
One touch && I lose all control.

First poem. It's short I know
Be honest xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    This was your first poem????
    wow i loved it
    it made me think of some old loves i had

  • 16 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    This was your first poem????
    wow i loved it
    it made me think of some old loves i had

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    It's a good poem for your 1st, but it could've been longer, still good though. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I like it though. =] its got lots of love in it.

    and thanks for commenting on my poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Its short
    its sweet
    its amazing
    it gets to the point which is supposed to be the point.. if that makes sense. 5/5 really amazing

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