Good things come in small packages, but yes it is a little short but i love it anyway!! looking forward to reading some more soon!! check out some of mine i'm dying for comments lol!!

This is a very good poem because in such few word you are able to say so much....keep up the amazing work. i cant wait for more to come please keep writing and i will keep reading 5/5

So be honest with you huh?
hmmm, your poem was awesome hehe but you really should add one last line to the poem so it suits the rhyming
*I've got all this love inside of me,
It feels like I'm about to explode.
One touch && I lose all control.
add line here suits with "explode"
and your poem will be much better (just an advice)

great job i liked this line alot

"One touch && I lose all control"

Short poems r best cuz tey r sweet too...

Nice 1 to b honest...

keep it up

Best wishz... Karan

Wow! It's so lovely.. I like it very much.. Keep it up.. 5/5

Wow I really liked this short and sweet.
5/5

Awww.. it was beauitful yes it was short but it truly said a lot. the word were simple but meaningfull. i love it. Amazing job.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Short:yes
amazazing :YES!
i loved it. it was honest and totally from the ♥!
Keep up the poetry<33

This is actually really well written for being a first.
in fact...
if you didnt tell me it was a first...
i wouldnt have known
great job<3

Its short
its sweet
its amazing
it gets to the point which is supposed to be the point.. if that makes sense. 5/5 really amazing

I like it though. =] its got lots of love in it.

and thanks for commenting on my poem.

It's a good poem for your 1st, but it could've been longer, still good though. 5/5

This was your first poem????
wow i loved it
it made me think of some old loves i had

This was your first poem????
wow i loved it
it made me think of some old loves i had