You

by Ashleigh   Feb 2, 2008


You really mean the world to me,
And I hope you know its true.
I never knew I could be this happy,
Until the day I met you.

I love it when you smile,
How cute it is when you laugh,
I would be nothing without you,
Your my other half.

Never doubt my love for you,
because forever it will stay,
When I hear you say "I love you"
I know I will be okay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Aww this is really simple and sweet =) I can totally relate to it. Rhyme and flow were great. My favourite lines:

    "I love it when you smile,
    How cute it is when you laugh,"

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Buetiful,loving,great poem!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem i have a friend that we call each other the half so i can kinda relate to this poem nicely written...5/5!!!...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was very sweet. whoever this is about it lucky to have love like this from you.
    my only thought is for this line

    "Your my other half."
    it should be
    "You're my other half."
    its the correct spelling.
    very good
    5/5

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