Sorrow

by pravin   Feb 2, 2008


I was in sorrow and pain
my grief she never heard
however made a cold look at me
but not a sympathetic word

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's good but too short... I guess you could have added few more lines.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I love it, simply love it. Short poems always say the most. 5/5