by 1Mistake Feb 3, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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I am the pain you feel inside, |
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I loved this poem, it was so well written and although the flow isn't what counts in a poem, its the intention and feelings behind each word i think that you did a great job, it was such an easy read that was just perfect!!! i loved your descriptions. keep up the great work!!! you have a lot of talent |
by Amanda
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This is awesome! it's how I feel. (and plus the title is of my favorite musical ever WICKED!) lol, it really shows your rhyming skills. |
by Skyfire
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Strangely, this poem made me think of the musical too...i think it could fit well. |
by Amanda
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That's a pretty sweet poem! I liked all the rhyming it tied together pretty well. I also like the title Wicked...it kind of reminds of my favorite musical...lol. Anyway, nice poem. |