Its unique and well written. i like the style and flow.

Awww! Saddness! The flow and everything was really great. There was a lot of emotion put into this. LOVE IT!! Great job!

Nightmare: Hahahaha! Way to gooo.

Cayce xx

I absolutely adore this poem... its written so passionately..like you meant every word... its so sad... your flow was perfect and i love your rhyming style.

"You're the only one who cares,
Bored, empty, waiting to be used,
And the only on who shares,
My memories, of being abused,"

^^in this stanza in the 3rd line, "on" should be changed to "one" ... simple mistake.

loved it.5/5

~michelle~

A nice poem, although I thought the rhyming couplets brought the quality of the poem down and it ruined the flow a little. But the emotions were nice and it was well written. Excellent 5/5

Awwwz wat a sad poem!
but very well written!
keep up the great work!!!

<3 i love you silly

Well I can feel your emotions in your words. I can also feel that you wrote this from your heart, Good job. The flow was smooth and I love the ending :)

AWWW SUCH I SAD POEM BUT I'M THE SAME WAY TO DIARY I HAVE THREE DIARYS THAT HOW MUCH I WRITE IN THEM, GREAT POEM WELL WRITTEN, IT'S TRULY IS A SAD POEM ITS VERY EMOTIONAL..KEEP WRITING!!!...=]..5/5

Its a sad poem with a lot of potencial..if i spelled that right..what really stood out to me though, was the fact you used friends and friendship a lot. the poem could've been catagorized as a broken friendship or something like that. overall it was an amazing poem with a great structure.
5/5 !props!

I like how you likened the diary's situation to that of the character's, it's unusual but well written.
Superb piece, keep up the good work!

Also, I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner, I've been moving house last week and with uni and my job, I've been really busy. Sorry again, but I'm glad I came, it's a great poem!