OUR WORLD

by Noo track to walk   Feb 3, 2008


Sometimes I thought
We both are just like children
So innocent and playful
Lost in our own world
That is so peaceful and beautiful
Forget about the world which is around us
Never wish to leave each others hand
But all will be ended one day
The dreams which we shared
We will be apart forever
But will never forget the peaceful world
Which we made for each other!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, it was so touching and i really was deeply into these stanzas and i do know how you feel.nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing poem. i wish we could always live in that peaceful world that is made for us....

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Love this poem!! the words are so great and your way of expressing your love and bond is amazing!! great job!! :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    But will never forget the peaceful world
    Which we made for each other!

    my favourites lines... that says alot of words.. its a short poem but behind this there is alot of pain.. that u hide.. express your self openly.. and it will work.. great job my friend. take care 5/5

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