I luv it it is so sweet i realate

Not Bad. good read.

Twas a good poem. And like Romantic Girl said, a lot, a LOT, stressing the "lot" can relate to this, mostly us teenagers. Heres something to answer your question:

When It wraps its arms around you,
Trapping, squeezing, torturing you,
Love can not be held in by you.
Send her to the one she whispers to you.

~~~~~

Just a short little thing is all. Maybe it helps, maybe it doesn't. But it's pretty much how I feel about this kind of stuff.

Aw, this is great.
i feel the emotions.

</3katelyn.

I love the way it flows...questions??..then feelings....great job...5/5...xoxo

OMG! this poem was amazing. You have a lot of talent. I felt emotionaly captured by your words. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Please check out some of my work. 5/5
kat

Aww..i can relate
5/5
:p
i loved it
*halie*

Nice poem
keep up the great work
:*dino*:

Hey, this is awesome. I like your tone throughout. Very smooth and mind cathing from someone your age. Keep it up darling and you will be even greater.

Damm ur good writting poems

Damm ur good writting poems

Very well written; keep up the great work!

That was so good, and i can totally relate to how you feel, you write amazing poems...keep up the amazing work....gr8 job
5/5

Wow, excellent job with this one, i think i can relate to the emotions in this one...

:)