Aww i liked this poem a whole lot your an awesome writter!! and you have alot on your plate right know but take it easy and everything will clear up....love ya

Very buetiful and sweet peom!

Waw i love ur feeling great jop

Great poem. wat happened to" your fallin angel"

I really loved ur poem!!!!! it's amazing!!!!!!

Wow......... very gud poem i lyked it a lot

Cool Poem!

This is so true..i know exactly where you coming from and saying...i luv it 5/5 =))
<3
kim

Thats the most beautifulest thing ever:)

Thats the most beautifulest thing ever:)

Thats the most beautifulest thing ever:)

Wow i love it.
What a great poem.
5/5.

WOW,
this is phenomenal.

My favorite lines are:
"my fallen angel, please take my hand,
poison me with your sweet kiss,
make my heart break and bend"

Soooo tragic.. I love this piece.
5/5.

-Osi

I really liked it i mean the change in the angel making her barely a ghost of her former self is a change everyone will witness at some point this was great! 5/5