When everything just crashes

by J u l e s   Feb 6, 2008


Every day i always look for ways,
I look for answers each day.
I Never really understood why,
But then as i slowly realized it was all just a lie...

There is a part of me that can't explain,
What went wrong but then i think maybe i'm the one to blame...
I am not sure how i can even come to complain,
But all that happened it was just never a game...

You messed around with me,
Every one else was able to see.
I believed that you could be the one,
I realize now though that maybe I'm D o n e.

You put me through so much pain,
I never realized though what i gained.
Through the days i spent crying over you,
I now learned that it was never worth my time but i simply never knew...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aish

    I get what you're bringing across, but it doesn't seem to flow as well as the rest of your poems. might be the amount of information you're trying to get into each line-im not sure.

    Every day i always look for ways,
    I look for answers each day.
    I Never really understood why,
    But then as i slowly realized it was all just a lie...
    ^^ i think the first two lines don't go very well together. They don't seem to fit-i think its the repeat of "day" but maybe that was done on purpose, if so you might want to add a word to that second line, i think it needs about 3 more syllables.

    really good though still.
    Another very expressive and emotive poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by StandStill

    Beautiful. very sad. :( great flow tho!

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