LOL. I like what you said about every guys heart is in his di*k, thats hilarious.

"for every piece of my heart I let you take"

i luv this part. its tru and meaningful. u dont need 2 suffer tho. only one guy is worth our pain, and that one wont hurt us. remember that.

But I won't give you the satisfaction
of knowing you're driving me insane
and so I will start moving on
before you start to see my pain

dese last lines really touched me... good dat u r moving on...hope dat happiness will always be with u..
overall good poem..

keep up..

But I won't give you the satisfaction
of knowing you're driving me insane
and so I will start moving on
before you start to see my pain- luv it
great poem

I really like this one it reminds me of so many things in my life!! great job!! 5/5

"every guys heart is in his d**k the only difference is his name"? ok that was the best thing iv ever heard im still laughin...wow

This incredible.
i can relate to it completely. not wanting to let a guy know how badly he hurt you. the emotion was perfectly described so that i could feel what you were feeling as if i was the one writing. it was very good. loved it.

Wow, this was all excellent poetry, incredible talent you have for writing!!! 100/100

Wow, this was all excellent poetry, incredible talent you have for writing!!! 100/100

Wow, this was all excellent poetry, incredible talent you have for writing!!! 100/100