I am a begginer poet, so I really apreciate comments, opinions, constructive critisism and advice. I really enjoy writting and I would like to know what others think of my poems. |
The clouds have faded and the stars have died.
What can you do when your dreams are denied...
So many things lie forgotten in my mind
memory causing anguish, I wish not to find...
Look into my eyes; I know you see the pain.
The pain I feel, has found its way again...
Unlock from your confinement;
free yourself from those chains...
A day ago I trusted you
more than I thought right...
So many things lie forgotten in my mind
memory causing anguish, I wish not to find...
The clouds have faded and the stars have died.
What can you do when your dreams are denied...
"How am I suppose to move on, when everbodys dead and gone?" |
"Pain runs much deeper than the skin, the pain I feel comes from within." |