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I'm a river
Flowing upon a river...
Her known dreams were unaccepted
Desire continues grief of thought...
Just knowing you're out there is like a dream
Knowing it may never come true...
A dream can be good
But not when its a nightmare...
She feels the breeze blowing through her hair
Standing there watching the waves...
I long to be held in you arms
So strong and safe I would be...
She feels the breeze blowing through her hair
Standing there watching the waves...
A dream can be good
But not when its a nightmare...
Just knowing you're out there is like a dream
Knowing it may never come true...
Her known dreams were unaccepted
Desire continues grief of thought...