OK, I made some changes to my original poem and...

Alone in the crowd
one star in the night...

Tiny purple flowers
upon my window sit...

But how?
what's the use...

Raped my death
denied by faith...

Go ahead; tell me it’s wrong…
Go ahead, tell me I need to change who I am...

The seasons are painted across your face
A cover for the scar left by her kiss...

Evening shadows
in darkness disappear...

No where near the end of time
Sent back to the starting line...

The burning, screaming pain within,
They call it love, I call it sin...

My inner beauty no one sees
Deep within it's hide and seek...

I wrote this to my girlfriend. I'm defiantly gonna...