~~~~Song Titles~~~~

RULES

1) NO NATURE POEMS
2)At least 6 lines
3)SUBMIT BY FEB,10
4)2 people per song title
5)People may pick 2 SONG TITLES TOPS
6)please dont write me a novel, lol

WHO WINS
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FIRST PLACE- 10 r/r/c
SECOND PLACE-7 r/r/c
THIRD PLACE-5 r/c/c

SONGS
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1) Living on a Prayer--Bon Jovi

a.

b.

2) Clumsy--Fergie

a.

b.

3)Teardrops on my Guitar--Taylor Swift

a. Jade

b.nyellmoonlight(done)

4) Better than me--Hinder

a. i love you silly

b. Bryan

5) Our Song- Taylor Swift

a. Jade

b. Lost and Confused

6) Get Stoned- Hinder

a.

b.

7) Down with the Sickness--Disturbed

a.

b.

8) Through the Fire and Flames--Dragonforce

a. Beautiful Chaos

b.Nyell Moonlight(DONE)

9) Tained Love-- Mailyn Manson/Soft Cell/ect.

a. Montritos Princess

b.

10) Paint it Black-- Rolling Stones

a. Beautiful Chaos(DONE)

b.

Paint It Black
Through The Fire & Flames

please and thank you

May I please have Tear Drops on My Guitar and Our Song

May I please have "Tained Love"?

Thanks!

.:CiNdY:.

"Our Song" :P

Teardrops on my Guitar & Through the Fire and Flames

Thanks :)

Through the Fire and Flames

Vacancy can't sew the words to each others
(liquid colors do not match, again)
amongst the stars of intricate creativity
intertwined with scarlet cosmic fantasies.

Motives collide, boiling within acridness,
weaving golden illusions over magnificence;
glassy senses plunge brushes into allurements,
gliding down bloody mosaics of the heart.

Colorful imagery whispers breakable syllables
destroying ebbs and tides of newfound worlds,
swirling within loneliness and fairytales;
vacancy can't sew the words to each others.

Ignore notions repaired under lonesome sky,
repaint the voids with fractured dreams;
through the fire and flames of complexness
melodies create celestial desires.

Teardrops on my Guitar

Deceive me with intricate deceptions
absorbed directly from your lips
moisten with lies, with sweet fantasies
that burn down thoughts in the mind.

Sheets colored with crimson hues
enwrap around strangling guitar strings
that whisper softly chords of tinted song
mirroring teary soul's particles.

Sadness drips from scarred fingertips
murmuring captivating promises,
seducing senses, seducing intellect
morphing hesitation into painful pleasure.

Gentle voice caresses puzzled feelings,
inhaling, as I close my eyes,
scents of this night, assorting fallacies;
Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody.

Deceive me with intricate deceptions
absorbed directly from your lips
moisten with lies, with sweet fantasies
that burn down thoughts in the mind.

Through The Fire & The Flames

Singed by life on so many fronts,
There is no turning back,
A bright and sunny, beautiful day,
Sometimes painted black.

Forgetting all good when facing the pain,
Leaves us feeling so lost,
Only we can fix what hurts inside,
Repairing the boundaries we've crossed.

Digging deep and looking back,
But not living in the past,
So we may learn and with time grow,
Wisdom that will last.

A cleansing breath, a single step,
The journey may begin,
Continue on from here my friend,
Your joy is found within.

The flames will kiss and lick your skin,
But you're always in control,
It's the moment that you've given up,
The fire comsumes your soul.

Can i have better than me???

Paint It Black

Sun shining,
Hearts Pining,
World unwinding,
Stop,
Paint it black.

Whispering stars,
Indulging scars,
Only time can take it back.

The kingdom's mine,
We will not shine,
Lost along the tattered line,
I stopped,
My paint was black.

The snake will slither,
As I wither,
Death,
No sudden track.

Dancing girls,
Such pretty twirls,
Untying strings and lacing worlds,
Inside,
Their hearts are black.

Greed and lust,
They shall combust,
Blood dripping through the crack.

A singing saint,
As angels faint,
Upon the alter,
No restraint,
Heaven,
Fade to black,

A darker end,
To you my friend,
A soul can't be bought back.

Holy crud holy crud holy crud...
THESE ARE MOST OF MY FAVORITE SONGS!!! wowzers! good picks!

Better Than Me please

IMPORTANT: It seems most of the people who were going to participate in my contest, have yet to submit a poem

THE ORIGINAL DUE DATE WAS FEB, 10
BUT I MAY POST PONE IT IF PEOPLE STILL
WANT TO JOIN

Tained Love

I have feelings of love
For the guy I see everyday.
Does he love me too,
What does he think of me?

I wish I could tell him,
He makes me whole,
But I'm afraid to say,
What's deep in my soul.

I don't want to lose him,
For I would be alone,
And some days I just can't wait,
To hear his voice on the phone.

He does certain things
To make me feel loved,
Some days he wants to be alone,
And my heart is shoved.

I want to feel as though
I am his safeguard,
The one he can come to,
When things get hard.

I will always be there,
To help him along,
And before we met,
I wasn't as strong.

I wish I could tell him
What I feel inside,
But I'm afraid of what he'll say,
Because simply,
I can't live without him.

.:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
.:Feb. 9, 2008:.

Well this is officially CLOSED

so i will do the judging as soon as possible
and i Will post the winners

Well I have read the few poems that were submitted. And here are the results.

3rd PLACE--Monstritos Princess--Tainted Love
2nd PLACE--Beautiful Chaos--Through the Fire and Flames

FIRST PLACE-- Nyell Moonlight--Teardrops on my guitar

If You people do not PM the poems that you
would like me to comment on. I will not comment on any of your poems.

Thanks Stephanie, nice job everyone.

Thanks Steph. I PMed you the titles for you. Good job everyone else.

Thanks a lot :)
Great job everyone~