Love Poem "Will You" -- 1/3

I wrote a new love poem called "Will You" and now I'm asking, Will you read it PLEASE? I mean, how can you resist that. I even made it a big please... And although you didn't see it I made puppy-dog eyes! haha

No really, can you please read this and give me some feedback? Of course this will earn you 3 r/r/c's and a praised comment if you critique it!

Plot:
The questions of love, that we all want answers to.

Rules:
Must comment back here to receive credit.

Other:
I love you all! :) hehe
I'll praise if you give a thorough and helpful r/r/c

*IMPORTANT*
Thanks to all of you giving honest feedback and r/r/cs, I've agreed with most of you that the poem felt "Unfinished" and created a final stanza for the poem. I would like to know if I should add it. So to any new readers... please consider the stanza I've submitted lower on this page as the final stanza. And to all that have already read it, please let me know if you feel this stanza finishes the poem...

Ok i will read and comment and rate!..hehe

K done, it was very sweet and well written :)
could u please do
"i will always love you"
"dont try"
"my mask"
thanxs

Done.

please do least reviewed poems.

ty

Done all, thank you for reading :) And I LOVED all of your poems... they were really good and I've enjoyed reading them. :)

Anyone else?

Pretty good poem!

Will you do:

"Dreamer's Never Leave Dreamland"
"Medicated with Moonshine, Looking For That Lunar Eclipse"
and any other feature you want.

Hey there, just did yours, please do my latest three, thanks a lot

Ben

Done. Latest three please. =]

Done. =]
Can you do my newest one and any other two please.

Done, please do any 1 of my latest and any 2 of my old poems

thanks bunches :D

I rated and made a comment, i sugest discrimination or The fairytale of dreams one! Thanks a bunch!

I still have to comment a few of you, didn't get around to all of you yet... and a lot of you felt it was unfinished. After reading over it several times, I felt the same and wanted to add a new stanza to really complete it. One that combines all 4 of the original questions and finishes with its answers.

And to anyone planning on reading, please consider this as the ending stanza if you felt it was too short. I'll add it if enough people agree. :) Thank you all very much...

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Will you follow me to the after-life?,
And listen to the angels sing,
Will you help me throw away this knife?,
Become one with me, and be my other wing...

OR

Will you follow me to the after-life?,
And listen to the angels sing,
Will you help me overcome my strife?,
Become one with me, and be my other wing...

Done
could you do any that will catch your eye