"The Spirit of Fall" -- 1/3 [click me]

Well, if you're reading this, you've followed the instructions [click me] lol.

Umm, wrote a different poem. It's unique and I think I've done a decent job of writing it. But you know, I need other peoples opinions... :P So if you r/r/c this I'll do 3 of yours :)

Plot:
The perspective of the Spirit of Fall.

Rules:
Must comment back here to receive credit.

Other:
Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy :P
(Will praise worthy comments)

Beautiful poem. Please do
Sweet Torture
Feelings for a Friend
Another Page in the Notebook

Thanks =]

Very nice poems. I loved all of them :)

Thank you for reading...

I commented, great poem, there should be enough of my critique in there for ya =p

Can you check

Show Me Love
Haunting Whispers
and
Life of the bottle

Thank you =)

Doneee...

Do.

Fire and Ice- alternate ending

The Darkness

Demise of my Sinuside

Can you pretty please do

sorry for being who i am
stranded love
i know you know

thanks

How could I resist a pretty please? :)

Very good poems from all of you. I've enjoyed reading all of them. And thank you for reading my poem :) It means a lot.

Lonely Romeo - Thanks for your critique, it was helpful :)

Anyone else?

Sitting scared
Dusk till dawn
Replaced

Done. Loved it.

Lingering in Silence
Flames of Parting