Comments.. Want them? by Brittney S.

To avoid bumming this to the first page I'm editing.

Alvaro- Done
Sheena- Done
Krathia- Done
Love Never Wanted- Done
Zeenat- Done
Brokenreality- Done
Kaila- Done
Ashleigh- Done

I've recently written a poem.. Haha you know cause this is a poem site so that's not too exciting right? Well I would like to hear some good critism on it. Cause you know.. it makes me a better poet.

SO here's the deal:

-Give me a "Great Job, really intense. 5/5" Shockingly, I'm going to return the favor.
-Give me a "*really long great cristism*" and I'll give you the same back. Amazing huh?!?!?

I'll rate of course.

I PROMISE YOU (cause you know there's a lot of people who promise to read your poems in return for reading theirs... and don't do it. Kinda pisses you off right? *hint why i'm doing my own little post*) that I will return the favor ASAP. I have no life. I work a little tomorrow, Friday, and Saturday. But still -no life-

SO.
I say: 1 for 2 is fair?

My poem's called:
Fear's Comeuppance

Thanks in advance. I'll be waiting to read yours :)

ALSO:

leave your titles. i hate fishing. If you don't leave them, I'm not going to do you. lol kinda sucks for you doesn't it? I'll remind you though if you don't.

Going to rate it if you can rate

i'll rate two poems just rate 3 if you can and if you want to do one more out of your kind heart lol tell me what you think of

Distance

dusk till dawn
a world i want
Sitting scared

I'll do it when I get the time.
Which will be awhile.
But, I'll try my best. =].

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Awesome. Unfortunately (for you) I happen to be the kind who is patient.

So to avoid being scammed (not that you would of course ;) lol) .. I'll go ahead and read yours then find you never read mine... Crap right? So! I'll wait to get to mine :P lol

Tough Love <3

I commented =] i'm not one of those people i do what i say i am going to do, words are what we got you know words make up poetry so i can never let my own words be lies unless its to my brothers and mom haha

Lol yes thanks. I just added more to if you would like to re-read it. I agreed and so.. i did what you said. i'll get on yours now lol.

Thanks again

Alvaro is all done.

Sheena I'll get to you once you get me (I'm sure you will)
and i want titles from you lol

Commenting right now...

Meanwhile, r/r/c Lingering in Silence?

Krathia once you do it, I'll do yours. lol :D

and make sure you get that other title

Phew, that took a long time. *rubs eyes*

Wait, two? This is a good deal!

Lingering in Silence
Flames of Parting

Done .
Could you please do :

`A Painter's Masterpiece
+. Faint Ruminations

Thanks, darlin' .
..__MiNDYY

Yes please umm
bring him back
&& whichever other one youd like to do