New member looking for feedback...

Hello, My name is Anita Harris. I have not EVER finished a peom, and was directed to this site about a week ago now. Since then I have completed only two, and would like to know what you think... Please read, vote, comment HONESTLY please, and in turn, I would be honored to read your works as well and reciprocate. Thank you so much, Anita

Your flow is amazing it is hard to believe you are not experienced You are gifted

Please comment on my latest and be gentle. Some of us have to work at being good

I don't have to be gentle with you dear... I loved you the moment I read you........ :) ~Anita

Thank you so much!!! Tasteless??? not really I think... Either way, loved "Butterfly kisses" now so far my Absolute Favorite, and several others as well. The others are much darker and deeper, but they certainly have their own passion and fire as well...

~Anita

Lovely poetry! I hope to explore the depths of more of your work at a later date.

Excellent work, though!

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Checked out your 2 latest ....they were great, btw.

please check out my latest.

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Hey, I really enjoyed the catombs poem. I really enjoyed your rhyming scheme, it sounded similar to my own work. You have a lot of potential but I found it hard to read at some points because it seemed you got lost in the words....but overall I loved it...thanks

To Sweet Escape...
Overall dear, you are by far the most critical, and the most honest... Which is SINCERELY appreciated!!! I love the suggestions and the constructive criticisms that give me new ideas to work with. Still, I may have to do a little of research on the "stanza's" that you mentioned, because... Novice for me is a gross under-estimate!!!

I have no idea what I am doing!!! That is why the realistic views of persons such as your self are so warmly desired and accepted, even if they are not so softly spoken as you!! Thank you so much! ~Anita