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Ok folks , this is the thing:

*2 post per poet (max)
*must have a rhyme
*must be adressed you your love one
*no reservation , jsut do it
*end with 20 post

winners:
1rst 5 comment
2 nd 3 comment
3 rd 2 comment

ok here we go

~robin milford
~robin milford
~ContradictingT houghts
~lemma
~Engel Augen
~Ash
~Ashes of a Black Rose
~Ash
~TwistedAngel xx
~TwistedAngel xx
~Raveena
~Jade
~Daniel Mulvany
~Daniel Mulvany
~Lizaveta
~Hellon
~Hellon
~ContradictingT houghts
~Melpomene
~Melpomene

Do they have to be new? I have the perfect poem for this but I wrote it a couple of weeks ago. Pm me and let me know?

Thanks,

Em xXx

No you can put a old one , i wil choose the best one

I'm confused what do u mean adressed you love ones do u mean it must be about a love one or ones self

I mean , the poem is adress to the one you love not yourselfs, if you are a guy adress to your girl , if you are a girl adress it to your man , simple

Dreams of Rose petel

Roses are red
I wish you were in my bed
romance aside
I want you by my side
to hold and keep
and watch you while you sleep
This is my dream
thoughts of you in my head
make me want to scream
cause I can't have you in my bed
Rose petals upon the bed
all around your head
but these thoughts
are only dreams
for I will never have my rose petel
Roses are red
I am blue cause I can't have you

Here is my first one I think I got what u mean now

My heart is not a dance floor

Tap, tap, tap goes your feet
despite my objection.
As you keep perfect beat
with the music in your head.
All I want is your attention
but all I receive is rejection.
I wish we would wed
but I was mis led
those vows stay unsaid.
Here I seat incomplete
while you mistreat.
I'm not perfection
so to her reflection
I pale in comparison.
Despite my objection
tap, tap, tap goes your feet.

For Jon

Lately I've just felt like crying,
Like there's nothing that I can do.
But with you supporting my every move,
I know that I'll make it through.

You're always there when I need you,
To tell me it will all be okay.
When you tell me you'll love me forever,
It means more than these words can say.

I'm still not quite sure what I'm doing,
But I know that you'll be there for me.
And one day, someday sooner than soon,
I know that I will be free.

Free of this gnawing guilt that I feel,
Free of the nights filled with tears.
For the time in between I'll count on you,
To banish all of my fears.

With you by my side there isn't a goal,
In the world that I cannot achieve.
And this is the reason I ask you;
Please honey don't ever leave.

I can't go one day without you,
To talk to, to hold and to love.
Surely we're meant for each other,
I feel you were sent from above

To make me sane when I'm crazy,
To talk me down from my ledge.
To save me from any danger,
That I'd ever jump over the edge.

You know I'm always here for you,
I'm a shoulder on which you can cry.
I'll be here for you like you're there for me,
On me you can always rely.

Thank you for being my angel,
For making me feel I belong.
Thank you for loving and not looking back,
Thank you for making me strong.

Enemies turned all days to fear,
couldn't pass the time without you near.
Declared once my love for you,
only to be dragged along like a tool.

The tears you cried,
I felt the pain.
The days you never tried,
I held your head up high.
The times when your fears would never leave,
the burdens of your life I would heave.

Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste.

Endlessly though but broken apart,
the memories linger - never to depart.
Reliving each moment of the precious dream,
looking back as it turned to a wasted stream.

Days and nights but turned so dark,
emptiness holding an unavoidable mark,
loneliness continued to creep in so fast,
why would things never last?

Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste.

Mesmerised by your every word and action,
fell into this fatal attraction.
Your eyes just always shone so bright,
you were my never fading light.

I'd give up everything for you dear,
I only wish to feel your presence near.
I'd hold you in my arms at night,
and build countless memories to soar a great height.

Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste.

It's a way of life unavoided along the path of love,
it's a feeling for which all continually starve,
days are endlessly dark and grey,
just sitting expressionless, trying to pray.

I've tried so hard to move along,
but a part of me within you belong,
I've tried to change my life and start afresh,
but each wave of hope continues to crash.

Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste.

Ok, so thing is, i have a series called "Letters To A Lover" and its got ten poems, obviously i cant submit them all, so here's the first one:

Reasons

You're the only person ever
That asks if I'm okay,
And when I say I'm fine,
You look me in the eyes,
And say, "Don't lie."
That's why I love you.

You're the only guy ever
That's made me smile
By just walking in,
Just saying "hi,"
It makes me grin.
That's why I love you.

You're the only one ever
To make my heart race
With each little touch,
When nothing before
Has meant so damn much.
That's why I love you.

You're the only guy ever
To say "No way,"
When I say "Love you more,"
To look in my eyes
And ask "Are you sure?"
That's why I love you.

You're the only guy ever
To keep all my notes
Inside of your wallet,
All there together
In one little pocket.
That's why I love you.

You're the only guy ever
That responds to "Chuck Norris,"
Quotes Halo and South Park
In regular dialogue,
And has my whole heart.
That's why I love you.

AND you're the only guy ever
That's SO on my mind
That you're in my dream,
Which caused me to wake up,
And write this at three.
Had to tell you why I love you.

BROKEN

Tears of my pain just falling down,
thought that the memories I could drown,
Clung to the bottle in my hand,
thought that your actions I'd defend.

Realized too late it was all a lie,
you're the reason these tears I cry.
I'd hoped for more than just an end,
but broken pieces can never mend.

We're over, we're done and we're through,
there's no more thinking of you,
there's nothing anyone can do,
'Cos you broke my heart.

Yeah, I'm reliving every memory,
every single day spent in agony.
Though the sun continues shining,
my heart still keeps on crying.

Where are those promises you once made?
Those dreams you built, you made them fade.
Why did you lie when you wouldn't try?
All you could do was say goodbye...

We're over, we're done and we're through,
there's no more thinking of you,
there's nothing anyone can do,
'Cos you broke my heart.

Why we have to live like everyone?
Watch in silence as it breaks apart.
Why couldn't we just have some fun?
And not have to watch each other part.

I still dream of you every night,
remembering the days we spent without a fight.
Your every word made me smile,
and every moment just seemed worthwhile.

We're over, we're done and we're through,
there's no more thinking of you,
there's nothing anyone can do,
'Cos you broke my heart.

Did you really know how much I cared?
With you my entire life I always shared.
Within you my strength I found,
you lifted my spirits from the ground.

I still remember every word you said,
around you nothing ever seemed bad.
I held onto the hope that you'll never go,
but that very night time went too slow.

We're over, we're done and we're through,
there's no more thinking of you,
there's nothing anyone can do,
'Cos you broke my heart.

You said your last words that very night,
everything faded - there was no more light.
Every part inside of me just broke apart,
but this was only just the start.

You blamed me for everything that went wrong,
I should have realized it all along,
You never really cared from the start,
I was just another name on a chart

We're over, we're done and we're through,
there's no more thinking of you,
there's nothing anyone can do,
'Cos you broke my heart.

Broken...
that's how I'm feeling right now.
Broken..
that's how the pieces now lie.
Broken...

No Matter What

by TwistedAngel xx

Forget the past
Forget it all

Just hold my hand
Don't let me fall

Forget the pain
Forget the fears

Just release it all
Don't fight the tears

Forget the bad
Forget the lies

Just remember that
I'll never despise

No matter what
We shall not flee

We will stay together
Happily

(C)Twisted Angel xx
20th April 08

Perfect

by TwistedAngel xx

She is very nervous
Checking to make sure everything is just right
She looks in the mirror
And sees her reflection staring back at her
But she looks different today

She is very nervous
Her palms start to sweat as she shakes from head to toe
She pulls herself together
And as the doors swing open to let her in
She primps herself one last time

She is very nervous
As she walks down the aisle, they all stare
She continues walking
With a terrified but happy grin on her face
She looks up ahead

There he is in all of his glory
The man she has known forever
The best friend she has ever had
The man who has always been there
The man she's about to marry

She is very nervous
She stands next to him and faces him with a smile
He holds her hand in his and looks into her eyes
All of a sudden everything feels right
The nerves disappear, she knows it's going to be perfect.

Submission date : 2008-02-17

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A Delicate Rose

I would send you a red rose
To tell you how much I love you
To convey all I feel
But a red rose just won't do

I would send you a lavender rose
To describe my love at first sight
All the beauty I fell mad in love for
But a lavender rose just isn't right

I would send you an orange rose
So you know this is something I'll pursue
To point out all of my passion
But it won't make my words come through

So instead I give you a glass rose
And you make ask me "why?"
This rose is the most delicate
Our love it goes beyond the sky

This glass rose will never die
Its beauty will live on forever
Like all my love for you
Now isn't this glass rose clever

One Sweet Day More

If I had the chance, could make the choice,
To see your face and hear your voice,
But one sweet day, just one sweet day more,
To get to know the girl behind,
Such warm blue eyes, a smile so kind,
Oh the depths of you I would explore.
If I weren't made to go away,
I'd wish to spend each coming day,
Showing you each fragile piece of me.
We'd break down walls around my heart,
And gather every piece and part,
To cast into an unforgiving sea.
But time has passed and ends my stay,
So tonight I'll hope and pray,
That I'll see you again another time.
I hope it not, but probably so,
You'll forget me when I go,
And all of this will be but wasted rhyme.
Your life is better without me.
I try to leave and let it be,
Yet have this yearning; oh what is it for?
I'm not sure but I'll pretend,
I will see this place again,
So I can spend with you one sweet day more.

Daniel Ray Mulvany

Do You Hear?

Do you hear my broken heart,
Calling out for you to mend,
Each fragile peice and mangled part,
In pain suspending end from end?
In hopeless words surrendered I,
My heart and soul forever yours,
And in each thought these words apply,
This pain occurs; this pain endures.
Incurring tears from empty eyes,
Suffering within each moment,
Without hope of compromise,
Nor reparation or atonement.
Do you hear, oh do you hear?
Did this not your soul impact?
Don't you long to hold me near,
To help me keep this soul intact?
You promised me, you promised that,
Forever couldn't hold us in and,
Even though the world weren't flat,
You'd walk with me off it's end.
Yet, seems that through this ruined vow,
You've left me with a heart that's broken.
If only you could hear me now,
Calling out with words unspoken.

Daniel Ray Mulvany

Hey all great jpb so far remmbe the rules ,

must have a rhym soo, be carfull waht you give me !!

:)

Lol mine [reasons] rhymes, like this:

[you're the only guy ever]
a
b
c
b
[that's why i love you]

Darling, you mean everything to me,
You're my shining sun
That lightens my world
And fills it with glee,
That is only one.

Darling, you are higher then the clouds
And you shine so bright
To lighten the world
From sky to the ground,
Your smile is a ray of light.

Darling, you warm me when I'm cold,
With your brightly flaming heart.
Just I beg, don't burn it, honey.
You can warm the whole world
But you're with me tonight.

Darling, I promise I'll be your wind
When it's too hot in the middle of the day,
When you need breeze, my Mr. Sunny
I'll blow any sorrow away
I promise, sweetheart, I will be your wind.

Ok guys anthing more ?

We are geting cose here, 3 mroe psot and we are done !!

hurry up and good luck!!

I'd Walk On Broken Glass To Be With You.

I'd move earth to hold you in a sweet embrace...

My heart strings play a melody like elegant cords to violin,
It's sweet I shall admit, Though sorrow does play within tune,
I miss you like the scent of summer distant while in winter,
Yet I yearn for you in opposite all the way throughout June.

I'd stop lightening to view the glow in your eyes...

My bones hold an ache such as one from a seasonal cold,
The chill up an old spine gets deeper with your very thought,
The only warmth I've come to feel is the one from burning fire,
Yet even that feels dim, Within snow my body becomes caught.

I'd battle thunder to hear the beauty of your voice...

Autumns leave drift calmly, What beauty orange seems to be,
Entwined with brown from your eye color how I hold on dearly,
"Come back to me" I'll whisper into a breeze of our memory's,
Though I know you'll be home soon, know I love you sincerely.

I'd walk through fire to kiss those lips once again...

....And I know you'd do the same for me..

Sing To Make Me Numb

Like sirens upon hell's islands bounding such wrath and fury,
You came to me in whispers, a dream of such innocent beauty,
Into my heart you sang, as gently my mind became numb,
Notes put together sweetly, how perfectly they were strung,
My misery became faded into the presence of sensual love,
"Dear God, How much I thank you for my gift from above."

The harmony you sang, swept my soul through summers air,
These are my words to you, my love I have come to declare,
Your song made me numb, Taking away life's fearful pain,
And through each high note you hit, misery began to drain,
As breathe was lost into thin air, while my heart suddenly healed,
"Dear God, How can I thank you for welcoming me, to lovers field."

You still sing to make me numb, As we hold each in an embrace
Through songs of amazing beauty is how you made my heart race
And as though the words of our song go on and forever change,
One thing remains the same, are the feelings that we exchange.
While the whispers of our melody travel silently from your lips,
"Dear God I thank you once again for this beautiful eclipse"

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good luck all i will post very soon , i did not read in advance to give all the good chance , hope i find good things
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when i finsih i will psot the answers here

Ok listen all

i will comment everyone 1 comment at frist and tehn i will anouce the winners , and the ones that wion get the more commetns and rate , hoep you all liek my coments i comment honest and fair

Dear all a bad news , in my country war raged , and internet is not very much availible for ,me , i promiss i will finsih all this week , sjut be patient enough it is not somthing i can do !

I have read till jade till now , i am have little more and then i tell you who won:)

We understand take your time do what u can when u can

I read till ContradictingT houghts
soo i will continue more later