"Smothered" - 1/3 [Lost and Confused]

Sorry guys, I just moved and got a new job and blah blah blah... so I haven't written much lately... but heres a new one for you. It's called "Smothered" r/r/c and I'll do 3! :P

Plot:
A man who is lost in a world of misery.

RULES:
Must comment back here to receive credit.

Other:
Please no one liners. Read it and give honest feedback.
I'll praise if you give a good one, but don't bash my poem to look like you've "critiqued" it.

Hope you enjoy! :)

Please do my latest

Commented and rated away!

choose any 3 i dont care as to which

Ill hold you to that '3' you promise!
And Ill read yours right now.

Done its great^_^
can you plz do the same for me and rate it.
I CONFESS I CANT LET YOU GO
I LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO
GREEN EYES.
thanks

Done :)

Please comment/rate:

* Ardent Waltz
* Burning Wings, Red Eye Kisses
* Soul Gazer

Thanks in advance!

Hi... Done...
It is excellently written...

Please do

I will come back
Miss u Mom
Memories

Thanx

Hi, it's been over a day and still you havn't done mine. *reminds*

Don't know if this is still open, but if it is -- Done .

`Moon-Doused Memories

is the only one I wish for you to do.
--..__MiNDYY