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  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Please comment my latest poem: "Eternal Rest"
    and I shall comment two of yours.

    - No one liners
    - Please comment and vote

    Thanks and have a nice read!

    P.S. I know it's not one of my greatest, but it's still a poem about what I feel. It still went out nicely.

  • Poet on the Piano
    17 years ago

    Nice job, very nice! Please do my two latest, "For One Of My Friends" and "The Forest Green" Thanks!

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Done!

    Anyone else?

  • Nathanilliam
    17 years ago

    Yeah i'll take a look. just do the two that you want to read, don't really care.

    EDIT: done! good job!

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Done!

    Miss Take - Thanks for all your help!

    Anyone else?

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Done!

    Anyone else?

    P.S. Some of the people gave me stories instead of poems. Please let me comment poems so I'll comment in the best way I can.
    Thanks and have a pleasant read!

  • xxxStarSxxx
    17 years ago

    Will do! could you do two of my latest poems?
    Thanks in advance!
    ~Stefanie

  • eehcuhhhz
    17 years ago

    Hmm...
    I believe mine are poems as well.

    I'm not sure.

    But still,

    Will you do my

    The Pounding and Flutters
    The other one you can choose

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Sorry it took me some time, was busy these days...

    I'm done now, anyone else?

    eehcuhhhz - Your poems were indeed poems, and even good ones :)

  • she
    17 years ago

    Very nice poem
    umm please read any of my new ones, that arent being read

    thnx :]