"With Pain of Sorrow"

If you could, please give me some of your wonderful thoughts on my poem "With Pain of Sorrow" I will gladly return the favor. I am interested in seeing honest opinions as well. You never have to worry about offending me in any way. Thank you in advance.

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Also.... If it is not any trouble and you have already read "With Pain of Sorrow" then perhaps you may like to read "Staring at The Slate of Asphalt". As always I will return the favor. and once again, thank you in advance.

Innocence (story) It's just a scene, I'm just trying to see if the c haracter seems real, sort like a girl you might see but never actually notice in your everday life.

There you go! You have an amazing talent. I mean it when I say that. Reading that story is one another reminder to me how amazing and brilliantly thought provoking writing can be.

Thanks :)

And I'm probably going to extend that story into something more.

Great poem.

Would you do "Editor"?

Yes, already done. Very questioning poem. I love to read something that makes me think.

Done :]

would you look at

"mommy daddy where did you go wrong"?

please and thank you if you dont mind its rather long i took time into it<3

Done. :]

Could you please do: Beyond The Realms Of Reality

Thanks.

Done.... 8)

Could you do my latest please?

Thankx.

Done. wonderful poem!