Anyone Want Honest Comments?

Name : Poet on the Piano
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Just post the name of the poem you want me to r/r/c. Only one poem per person please. I'm doing this for free, so no need to return the favor. Well, that's about it!

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THIS POST IS NOW CLOSED! I ENJOYED READING EVERYONE'S WORK. THANK YOU...

- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
17 years ago

Okay, done. :)

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- Name : smiley
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smiley
17 years ago

Can you do my new poeam plz

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- Name : Christopher Hantman
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Christopher Hantman
17 years ago

Any of my poems an honest yet still constructive opinion would be great

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
17 years ago

Both of yours are done.

Anyone else?

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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- Joined : May 18, 2008
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Courageous Dreamer
17 years ago

Can you do my newest poem, please?

Thnksss. Glady appreciated.

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- Name : NyellMoonlight
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NyellMoonlight
17 years ago

Please comment on: "The Sky Is Falling". Thanks in advance.

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- Name : Craze
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Craze
17 years ago

Yes, but please keep in mind that my poems are actually lyrics. Thanks.

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
17 years ago

Okay everyone, done.

Keep them coming...

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- Name : IdTakeABulletForYou
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IdTakeABulletForYou
17 years ago

Um,

It's Best to Just Pretend...

please and thank you =]

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- Name : Adelle
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- Posts : 156
Adelle
17 years ago

A soft and gental reminder please

Thanks very much

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- Name : IdTakeABulletForYou
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IdTakeABulletForYou
17 years ago

Thank you Breaking Dawn =]

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- Name : BREEawNUHH
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- Posts : 9732
BREEawNUHH
17 years ago

My latest, if it's not too much trouble?

Thanks.
:]

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
17 years ago

IdTakeABullet- you're very welcome.

And I'm done with yours, BREE aw NUHH. Great work.

Okay, while I'm still on, anyone else want some free comments and critique?

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- Name : Faithless Watermelon
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Faithless Watermelon
17 years ago

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1077839

i have no idea if you're still on, but i'd like it if you reviewed this one for me! ^.^

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- Name : InvisiblyHeartless
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- Joined : Jun 19, 2008
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InvisiblyHeartless
17 years ago

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1077481

Thanks !

I appreciate this.

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- Name : The Dark Poet
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- Posts : 34
The Dark Poet
17 years ago

Yeah Please and Thankz in advance any or all of mine.

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- Name : Sweet Fragility
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- Posts : 295
Sweet Fragility
17 years ago

"Paint it black", please.
thanks a lot.

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- Name : Alisha
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- Posts : 54
Alisha
17 years ago

"woman torn apart" please and thank you

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- Name : Blissful
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- Joined : Oct 13, 2007
- Posts : 6284
Blissful
17 years ago

Lost Dreams don't Shatter; They Bleed Hope.

thanks. :]

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
17 years ago

Okay, I'm done with your comments.

Thanks to everyone, I enjoyed reading your work! :)

This post is now CLOSED.....

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- Name : rhend
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rhend
16 years ago

These following poems of mine:

The temptress

shakespeare in action

if i dream of you tonight

nostalgia

thank you! a
lot!

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- Name : ether
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ether
16 years ago

^ it's closed.

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