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*Our Fairytale

Do NOT leave me a one liner or I'll just disregard your work.

Be honest, it's called constructive critiscim (Sp?) I can handle it!

Leave titles.

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Hey I will gladly comment your poem. I'm going to warn you, ,I don't sugarcoat anything. I would appreciate if you did the same.

In This Quiet Corner'

and any other of your choosing. :)

"Tragic Sun" and "Burning" :D

Done!!

my 2 latest pls..........

thanks

Donee. My two newest would be good, thank you =]
And good poem.

jess ~

Lol.. i see ppl do a good job at reading ... cause although you specifically asked them to leave titles all i see as responses is " my two latest/newest" ...

-- i thought it was interesting.--- haha.

anyways.. on to the poemm.. i liked it.. good read:)

could you please do :
" We'll Forget"
&&
" Our rose"

which just happen to be.. my two latest :)
thnnxxx

If you could comment on Broken By You and Locked Away I would be grateful Plot121

Shooting Star-Done
Matthew martin-Done

I will continue on these tomorrow.

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