"Finding Illusions of Insecurity" -- 1/3

Hey -- I wrote a poem about my relationship that has been bothering me lately. I would appreciate it if you would read and let me know how you feel. Or if you can see my emotions showing.

So if you're willing to r/r/c this one. I'll do 3 for you!

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Thank you all for you reading!

A HEART FOR A HEART

Done.

Can you do "I Have Fallen For Him", "A Masterpiece", and... "Just For You". Thanks ^^

My new one please. it's about my bad relationship too.... :)

Done. i voted and commented, please do
-Am i truly in your heart ( redone )
-Don't dream, its over
-My lust ruined my life

thanks, and nice piece

Hi its done! u know what i really that kind of poems. thanks for writing it..

anyway pls rrc any 3 of mine that cathces ur eye

thanks alot

Well i did my share if you could give me a rate and comment on any of my featured work I would be grateful Plot121