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- Name : Lethmelodis
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Lethmelodis
16 years ago

Hey, if you wouldn't mind, could you do "Die In The Fire"? Ill even post a link, as well as return the favor.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=1110973

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- Name : Hidden Feelings within these Words
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Hidden Feelings within these Words
16 years ago

Hey could you do "That Night" ? Thanks,
-Ally

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- Name : Cyber Saiyan
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- Joined : Feb 1, 2008
- Posts : 375
Cyber Saiyan
16 years ago

A Short Poets Tale

OR

Why

Thanks in advance.

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- Name : Hatori
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- Joined : Feb 1, 2007
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Hatori
16 years ago

Could you please do "Paper Planes"?
Thanks ^_^

--Hari

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- Name : Lonely Rider
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Lonely Rider
16 years ago

Somebody take me Home

thanks :)

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- Name : CanUKissAwayMyPain
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- Joined : Jun 17, 2008
- Posts : 319
CanUKissAwayMyPain
16 years ago

Can you do "Precious Moments" n "I'm Yours"
Grachias In Advance =]

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- Name : Lori
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- Joined : May 23, 2008
- Posts : 612
Lori
16 years ago

"Pretend". Thanks soo much!!

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- Name : Krathia
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- Joined : Feb 19, 2006
- Posts : 195
Krathia
16 years ago

Haven Rain, please. Thanks!

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- Name : Pesamenteiro
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Pesamenteiro
16 years ago

Was it silence?

Thanks ^.^

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- Name : No Need For A Name
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No Need For A Name
16 years ago

Could you please comment on my lyrics "Keep Moving Fingers" Thank You.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

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- Name : ghosts in bloom
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ghosts in bloom
16 years ago

`Eliciting A Ghost`

(: Thanks in advance!

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- Name : Cyber Saiyan
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- Posts : 375
Cyber Saiyan
16 years ago

Rhetorical Emotions.

Thanks in advance.

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- Name : CanUKissAwayMyPain
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- Posts : 319
CanUKissAwayMyPain
16 years ago

Can you do
"Waiting in the shadows until, the sun hits me to shine" n "HIM"
thanks in advacne =]

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- Name : Lonely Rider
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Lonely Rider
16 years ago

Will you still love me tomorrow?

thanks

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- Name : Ashleigh Skye
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- Posts : 2102
Ashleigh Skye
16 years ago

Can you please do "When the Clock Hits Twelve (Tanka)" thanx in advance

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/edit_poem.php?id=1052105

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- Name : PygmyPuff
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- Joined : Jun 1, 2006
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PygmyPuff
16 years ago

Featured please... perhaps "A Break" since its new (just added today) or "Its not us, its you" because that needs serious work (but its long... helo me cut it down?)

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- Name : Inside the Liar
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Inside the Liar
16 years ago

"I Always Knew" please and thank you.

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- Name : Cotton Candy Clouds
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Cotton Candy Clouds
16 years ago

"Tongue Tied and Terrified"

thank you so much!!

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- Name : Spirit
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- Posts : 658
Spirit
16 years ago

Oh do a random one of mine

If you can't pick just do one of my newer ones.

Please and thank you

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- Name : Lady Nik
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Lady Nik
16 years ago

Relapse. please and thank you

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Name : Clown
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Posts : 1029

Clown
16 years ago

Anyone, PLZ read and coment on my monolog, 20 min. in Hell, its not new by any means, but its my work at its absalute best and i would love to see more ppl that enjoy this particular pieace of work

- Name : unknown
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unknown
16 years ago

You're my missing piece , please ..
Thank you .......

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- Name : xToBeWithYoux
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- Joined : Apr 27, 2008
- Posts : 1545
xToBeWithYoux
16 years ago

Could you do Midnight Train please?

Thanks in advance :)

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- Name : Faithless
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- Joined : Sep 6, 2008
- Posts : 657
Faithless
16 years ago

Well if you have time, do check out my poem

Golden Dome

Thx in advance;)

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- Name : TheRapture03
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- Joined : Jan 4, 2007
- Posts : 96
TheRapture03
16 years ago

Could you do "IF God is Dead"

thanks alot!

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- Name : No Need For A Name
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- Joined : Feb 22, 2006
- Posts : 201
No Need For A Name
16 years ago

Could you please comment on my new lyrics "The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street Tonight"
Thank you,

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD

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- Name : Hollymariee
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- Joined : Mar 31, 2007
- Posts : 172
Hollymariee
16 years ago

Pretty please do The X-Ray :) .

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- Name : RobinAnn13
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- Joined : Jul 27, 2007
- Posts : 283
RobinAnn13
16 years ago

Any uncommented one of mine is fine.
I'd be very happy to return the favor though.
Thanks in advance, I'll comment one of yours soon too.

^.^

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- Name : Wake Me Up
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- Joined : May 21, 2008
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Wake Me Up
16 years ago

Can you do any of mine please

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- Name : Clown
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Clown
16 years ago

Plz do Raven of my Soul

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- Name : anonymous lover
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- Joined : Sep 16, 2008
- Posts : 139
anonymous lover
16 years ago

Please comment
"Stung by a scorpion"

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- Name : Krathia
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- Joined : Feb 19, 2006
- Posts : 195
Krathia
16 years ago

Can you do Slumber Still? Thank you!

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Name : Sapphire
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Joined : Oct 11, 2006
Posts : 24

Sapphire
16 years ago

Hey guys, I'm working from the bottom up, and I'm working like crazy to get all poems done. If you've been waiting for a long time, I apologize, yet I hope to get to all of them in the next day or two.

- Name : forevertobeart
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- Joined : Jun 14, 2008
- Posts : 457
forevertobeart
16 years ago

"Sing Me Then." if you have the time. If not, that's perfectly fine. I understand. :)

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- Name : Joshua Reimer
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- Joined : Nov 18, 2007
- Posts : 14
Joshua Reimer
16 years ago

Did you ever and if you have time a pessimists wish thank you in advance

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- Name : Lori
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- Joined : May 23, 2008
- Posts : 612
Lori
16 years ago

"The Part Where I Cry"

Thanks so much! You are soo generous!
:D

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- Name : AnCi
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- Joined : May 15, 2004
- Posts : 199
AnCi
16 years ago

Painful Goodbye

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Name : Clown
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Joined : Feb 10, 2005
Posts : 1029

Clown
16 years ago

If it to much to another one, Sonnet of a Fallen Angel, that would be great if you can, and if you cant, its cool, LOVED the comment for Raven of My Soul, thank you very much, Il return the favor even tho your not asking for it.

- Name : Fluffy
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- Joined : Nov 2, 2005
- Posts : 2315
Fluffy
16 years ago

GREETINGS, kind poster.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could read:
Counter-Actor
&
The Outside Smile on Tuesday.

Please and thank you :)

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- Name : KeyxMashingxParody
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- Joined : Dec 29, 2006
- Posts : 701
KeyxMashingxParody
16 years ago

Any of the most recent. please and thank you ma'am.

=]

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