One for three.

Name : Jad
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Aug 26, 2008
Posts : 2864

Jad
16 years ago

I'm kind of bored now a days. So if you will comment on one of my poems then I will in return comment on three of yours.
If you want me to comment on a specific one then give the titles.
I had another post that said one for two if you want to have any other poems commented on.

- Name : Michael D Nalley
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jul 6, 2004
- Posts : 6879
Michael D Nalley
16 years ago

Please do

Broken Covenant
sinning sainted cynic
mikes epitaph

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- Name : Chocolate Addict
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Mar 21, 2009
- Posts : 10
Chocolate Addict
16 years ago

Done yours diminished

please do

Deja vu
Enmity Felicity
Victim of love

thx

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Ill get to this Monday sorry for the wait.

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- Name : Sumit Ojha
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Aug 13, 2007
- Posts : 166
Sumit Ojha
16 years ago

Done

Your poem "Refuse to Believe" is really awesome

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- Name : Atomic
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 19, 2005
- Posts : 2404
Atomic
16 years ago

One will do just fine, thanks.

"Children Never Forget"

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

I've done michael D Nalley and now I'm working on Chocolate addict

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Done with Chocolate Addict I'll do Summit ojha and atomic after I get done with school today.

Is there anybody else????

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- Name : Esther
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jul 16, 2005
- Posts : 503
Esther
16 years ago

Pick any of mine, I'll do the same for yours.

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

I'm done with Sumit Ojha and Atomic and Esther.

Is there anybody else????

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Anybody else????????????

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- Name : No Need For A Name
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Feb 22, 2006
- Posts : 201
No Need For A Name
16 years ago

Finished. Copuld you please comment on my lyrics
Play Without a Stage
Falling From Grace
Jaded

Thank you,

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

I've finished "No Need For a Name "

Is There Anybody else??????

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Anybody else??????

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Apr 22, 2005
- Posts : 7118
ASPHYXIATED
16 years ago

Done.
3 newest please.

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Finished and is there Anybody else??????

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- Name : Annaam
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jun 11, 2008
- Posts : 83
Annaam
16 years ago

Did 2.

DO any 3 Of ur chOice..

Thankx! :)

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Good job on those poems they were really good. Done.

Is there anybody else?????

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- Name : Lady Nik
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Mar 20, 2006
- Posts : 1927
Lady Nik
16 years ago

One Love
Jailed Bird
Killing Me Slowly
Please and thank you

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- Name : PygmyPuff
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 1, 2006
- Posts : 693
PygmyPuff
16 years ago

My featured, or any with only a few comments (as they can be improved)

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

I'll get to these after school sorry for the wait.

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Done with "Always His Girl" and working on the next one.

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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Done with "pygmypuff" and

Is there anybody else?????!!!

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