The Dumbest game EVER! Pt 191

"You're not meant to double post... :/"

Woopsidaisy xD

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my best friend is graduating tonight! yay her! :D

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:D

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Looks like it's just you and me then Mr Darcy lol. Other people can post!! Haha :)

Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

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It sure does. Still a collaboration is good too! I am hoping once we have finished we can all have a go at polishing it up.

Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage
^
I mean she sees herself in the rearview mirror.
*I think she might be so enraged that she has a fatal car accident. This would lead to the last couplet being her last thought/ breath. Just a thought?

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Now that is a very good idea :D

Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals want my head to explode.

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Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals want my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page
^
This is the car/ her mind becoming damaged.

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:)

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Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals want my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page,
My wake of destruction scorching the road.

*Maybe for the couplet compare her previous relationship/troubles to the car wreckage now, like her mind and her car are destroyed? Just an idea lol.*

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Still no one else online Bree? Haha :D

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lol. :P

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:)

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Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals want my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page,
My wake of destruction scorching the road.

Your tendril of deceit spill out my life
Come now raven peck the eyes from your wife
^
Just an idea, I would like to see other possible endings. C'mon people!

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..anyone?

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Hi! I'm here! I was alseep :D Gimme a mo and I'll think of one, it'll probs be awful haha :D

Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment through a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a silent blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice takes on a horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals want my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page,
My wake of destruction scorching the road.

Tattered hearts fragmented; the state of mind.
Murderer. Sadly, hearts are still entwined.

^ Mine isn't too good but it's the best I can do :)

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Any good sad/nice/depressing/love songs I can listen to? :)

And, sorry for the long break guys.. bet you all missed me!!?? HAHAHA kidding. :P

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Nicole! Erm, there's a slight problem with the club... if you hadn't noticed lol :)

Listen to Muse. That will always be my response :)

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Nice couplet :D

I guess its' first draft is completed. What do you think of it?
Personally, I would like to tweak it here and there, or at least see if it can be improved. How about we both have a go and re-post what we have?

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Good morning! :D

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Sonnet so far:

Devine Wind

Lights spark and fragment on a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a crooked blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice now takes an horrific new shape.

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals commands my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page,
My wake of destruction scorching the road.

Your tendrils of deceit spill out my life
Come now raven peck these eyes from your wife

I have altered it slightly. Please feel free to edit if necessary. :)

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Hi everyone! :D

Sonnet so far:

Lights spark and fragment on a salty sea.
Questions flitter behind strained, tired eyes,
Whilst a crooked blade twists inside of me.
Oh so dark, the venom seeps from his lies.

Infecting these wounds that silently scream,
Paralysed emotions claw to escape.
A seething demon with a vengeful gleam,
Malice now takes an horrific new shape.

^^ 'an' horrific? I know this is more grammatically correct but when I say it, it doesn't sound right. Maybe it's my Suffolk bumpkin accent :D

She stares right through me, reflecting my rage,
Shrieking morals commands my head to explode.
Deceit rotates, then crumples like a page,
My wake of destruction scorching the road.

^^ I think it needs to be 'command' as it's a plural :)

Your tendrils of deceit spill out my life
Come now raven, peck these eyes from your wife

^^ added a comma, but deceit is repeated. Synonym, possibly? :)

I made corrections from your last post since it's easier, so I'm guessing we're using your couplet, it's better anyway :D

Erm, yeah that's about it. I say good work! *high five and opens a bottle of non-alcoholic champagne* haha :)