The real you poetry contest

After looking through all the poems posted here and the ones sent to me - I asked a friend and fellow member on here to do the same (David Dork) and we both decided on the same person

Lilium
Well Done ^^

Your poem was chosen because it has a lot of potential and your wording is beautiful =]

Everyone else also wrote very well and will have two poems commented =] and will recieve their ratings

The top is meant to say there are NO particular requirements

This sounds really cool, I am totally in!

Sounds fun although i havnt got anything for you to comment on will do it for the hell of it tho

XD you got you icon from lol comics too!

Im in!

Title: Liliums Exquisite Pain (The Perfect Storm)
By: Lilium

I delineate the obscurities of the pleas that are my own broken whispers-
I have a shroud of depression that represents an evil serpent that leaves festering blisters.
There is a pain that subjugates my minds short-term streaks of being blissfully content-
Too often though I am subjected to an entirety of burdens that leave me weak and spent.

The wreckage of my inner havoc can also cause commotion to my outer illusion-
Barriers that are injured and are like that of a wound bleeding in profusion.

How do I cope with the sensitivity of my body's immaculate embrace for sorrow?
Do I plead down on my knees for salvation hoping for a happier tomorrow?
This emptiness engulfs the dread that blossoms like a flower in its latest sprout of bloom-
Turmoil racks my brain while I sit in deep lazes in the circumference of my room.

The loneliness that encases my bereft arms in heartaches form-
My damaged alternate universe is my own creation and the exquisite pain is my perfect storm.

I'll give it a try. :)

The Life Neglected (A Walk Through Our Future Past)

This life neglected,
Before its' end.
Rip down the walls
This Earthen prison, bare
Those who come, beware
Be very ware.

Dead flowers,
Crushed 'neath scarred feet
Shards of broken glass,
Cutting deep
Mirror of revealing cracks,
A hidden destiny

Pictures of old,
Crumbling to ash,
These lives of
Stories never told
A waiting fate behind
The smiling faces

Vines entwined
Choking gnarled trees,
Dead leaves hiding
What lies beneath
The life neglected
Before its' end.

-MidniteRain

Mind if i give it a go?

Well i am in too ... here is my poem

=== My Truant Soul ====

My Entire Core and Senses are Cursed
In Attic of my Skull Whispers Screaming

Driving me Crazy, am i gonna Burst?
Abomination and Hatred i am filled with is Shrieking

i Crawl Towards the Answers
Like a wounded Ghoul Pleading for Mercy

Losing my Strength and Faith once i fancied
Lying in the Cradle of Sins unguilty

As a Phoenix i Reincarnates but more Filthy
Traitors twisting their Daggers deeper in my Back

and the blood Slithering in my Veins Feels a smoke
Death is Near, Whispering in my Ear

i Beg for a chance, but no one dares to Hear
Trembling i stand my Eyes filled with Tears

Suffering immortal Pain and the Ultimate Fear
i Drop to the Hard ground Losing my hold

Creeping Weak and embarrassed of my Own Soul
So embarrassed to Beg my Own Lord!

This Is Me.

Blue eyes that shine in the light,
secrets withheld deep inside.
This is me.

My story is one filled with pain,
betrayal topping the everlasting list.
This is me.

I hide my secrets from everyone around,
remaining the quiet one, alone in the corner.
This is me.

Pressure from a life I no longer want,
pouring stress into a tiny bottle.
This is me.

Resting upon what could have been,
swimming in the deep of what I've succumbed to be.
You're sure you want to know me?