It's a rewrite!

  • Mr Rhee
    16 years ago

    Ok. I wasn't happy with this one, so I changed a few things, AND the ending. for those of you who read it before, try it now. Maybe a comment and a rating? I'll return the favor. Thanks!

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  • DarkCrystalbtrfy
    16 years ago

    Not quite sure if i commented on the right poem seeing as you left no tittle here lol. but I liked what I read! please review Muse
    thanks!

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  • KJ
    16 years ago

    I believe I rrc the right poem as well
    Amazing write

    Could you please do Night of Your Life [Part I]

    please and thank you

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