Clear your mind... then write a poem

  • Jackie Bilson
    20 years ago

    I did that, and this is what I came up with. I don't get who I'm talking to or what I'm talking about:

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    I know I'm not a good person
    I know I'm seldom true
    Because there's only one person I've truly loved
    And that person was you.

    Forgive those who've sinned against you,
    And by that I mean me.
    I'm sorry I was such a jerk
    But it's the only person I know how to be.

    Surrender your soul into the light,
    Say goodbye to us all.
    Forget the things you thought were right,
    The writing's on the wall.
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    Are these subconsious thoughts I've been having or a subconsious poem (I don't know how to write non rhyming poetry) I've made? Anyone ever do this?

  • Sierra Rae
    20 years ago

    wow that's interesting...I'm gonna have to do that pretty soon. If you truly cleaned your mind and only focused on the poem, then i would say that it was a subconsciencly written poem...i say that this should show you a lot about yourself. now i'm definitly going to do it...

  • Jackie Bilson
    20 years ago

    Oh, tell me how it works out and what you come up with ok? This was really strange to me.